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Mio Akiyama by TheBluePenguin8 Mio Akiyama :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 The great Wave off Kanagawa at Suunset by TheBluePenguin8 The great Wave off Kanagawa at Suunset :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 20 1 Emi Young by TheBluePenguin8 Emi Young :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 5 0 Heart it Breaks by TheBluePenguin8 Heart it Breaks :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 5 0 Belle Aire Motel By Magaliciousart - Edited by TheBluePenguin8 Belle Aire Motel By Magaliciousart - Edited :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 2 Sunset by TheBluePenguin8 Sunset :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 0 0 Shelby by TheBluePenguin8 Shelby :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 2 0 Apocalyptic Questions by TheBluePenguin8 Apocalyptic Questions :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 2 0 Artist Eye by TheBluePenguin8 Artist Eye :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 Friend of a Friend by TheBluePenguin8 Friend of a Friend :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 2 0 Splatter by TheBluePenguin8 Splatter :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 5 0 Ellen Kathleen by TheBluePenguin8 Ellen Kathleen :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 Lost Child by TheBluePenguin8 Lost Child :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 Vinyl Record Freedom by TheBluePenguin8 Vinyl Record Freedom :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 Kayla by TheBluePenguin8 Kayla :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0 Earth by TheBluePenguin8 Earth :iconthebluepenguin8:TheBluePenguin8 3 0

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So if you remember I've critiqued you not too long ago. I'm glad to say you've taken my advice and made some strong improvements! The h...


Alright so this is pretty basic in texture, I really like the hair texture but you have to zoom in to be able to see it. The shading is...


First off, unless it is your style, I suggest using capital letters for words you may want to emphasise, or for the first word of each ...


I love this photo! The implied lines take me across the entire photo. The color is a subtle yet strong contrast. The green is visible y...

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TheBluePenguin8
Zachary/Zoey
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
United States
I like to draw. Please critique my work so that I may improve.
I did not get this far into drawing skills, by being told my art is perfect.

"The only thing that can be achieved in life without effort, is failure."
- Unknown
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A young life, 18 years told to follow the rules
set free at last by time
freedom to live as life was made to be;
To explore the open roads before him
to expand knowledge of not only the world, but of himself.

Feelings of Freedom roll in as waves
for the opportunity to do as one pleases has arrived;
To seek out beauty in the valleys and mountains
to bloom friendships in the cities and towns
to find adventure in everyday life;
to create what has not yet been
to fix what has been broken
to find what has been lost.
All things are possible
overwhelming it may be;

Yet, the journey begins.
  • Listening to: The wind
  • Reading: The clouds
  • Watching: The storm approching
  • Drinking: Fresh Air
The great Wave off Kanagawa at Suunset
I painted this on my school brick wall inside the building. I was able to use four bricks instead of the usual one, so it took a lot of extra time to finish, but it came out great.
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So if you remember I've critiqued you not too long ago. I'm glad to say you've taken my advice and made some strong improvements! The hair texture is much more bold and noticeable. Because you have a stronger change from light to dark it gives the hair a lot more form. The dress also has some nice contrast with light and dark. however, I encourage you to increase the dark and light even more. your shading is still a little too subtle on the legs. (also, you can draw hands, so why not draw some simple toes? It would make her feel more real). Also the right shoulder is a little lower then the left shoulder. But in general body proportions have improved from when I last saw.

In conclusion. you are improving, keep up the good work. But make sure to increase the color shifts from light to dark to add more form. It would really make your work stand out.
Raining indoors
    Atmosphere could be either be depressing or uplifting based on lighting and building environment
        Could include a person showing sadness or enjoyment based on the mood.
Clouds indoors
    Atmosphere would have an air of fantasy and wonder to it. Bright environment.
        could be a person representing a happy mindset contrasting with someone who is upset that has dark clouds near them.

Galaxy/space environment in everyday things
bland world with galaxy hair
tea/coffee galaxy from the steam
literal mind being blowing and galaxy is the splatter. same concept except with music and headphone music.

Inverse reality
examples- fire is water.
    raining fire, fire extinguisher is fire starter, drinking fire, fish swimming in fire (So on so forth)
        further concept - clouds of fire and sea of fire (Beautiful, not scary)

fantasy worlds
    Basic geometric shapes in 3D form (maybe some 2D shapes) in front of a dark colorful background (like space). Some 3D shapes will have natural worldly things on them such as a TV, radio, a person reading (so on so forth).
         Each world would have its own mood and colorful enviroment.

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EliTanDark Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much for adding my illustration "#122" to your favourites. It means a lot to me!:rose:

                                     Thanks for the Fav Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] Bunny Emoji-87 (Thanks) [V5] Llama Emoji-39 (Eager) [V2]
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IIZitipandII Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the fav :huggle: :heart:
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TKRabe Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the Fav Meow :3 
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ChibiYvi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the fav!
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fenifire Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017   Traditional Artist
thank you so much for the :+fav: :hug:
I'm so happy that you liked my work :happybounce:
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ChibiYvi Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! I'm so happy! ^w^
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LizzIkanaka Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the favorite and watch! :)
I hope you'll enjoy my art and my growth over time :)
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Artistic-Ana Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch nd thank you for making my art your favorite.
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Jennifer56Wren Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you again for the faves.. appreciate you taking the time!!
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Jennifer56Wren Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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